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Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.
- Yesterday, my family visited our grandparents'house.
- My grandfather went pass away his life.
- So my grandma lived with my uncles and my aunts.
- First, me and my parents came to Hanoi to had lunch with my brother and all members of my family went to Hai Duong.
- We went there by a bus and a coach.
- I was very tired.
- I went there late and had dinner late.
- After that, we took a bath and visited some relatives. They were old.
- Some of them were my aunts'grandparents.
- Some of them were my uncles.
- Some of them were my great grandparents.
- This morning, my family incensed for one of my grandpas.
- The weather was sunny.
- I felt very hot so I didn't go to the cemetery with my dad and my brother.
- I was at home and drew some guns and a girl.
- Then, I took the iphone of my cousin and played.
- We played and had lunch soon because my family must leave soon.
- We came home by a big coach.
- It was comfortable.
- So when I came home, I wasn't tired.
- misangocle08022004August 2016Rösta nu!
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