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  • Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.

    • Yesterday, my family visited our grandparents'house.
    • My grandfather went pass away his life.
    • So my grandma lived with my uncles and my aunts.
    • First, me and my parents came to Hanoi to had lunch with my brother and all members of my family went to Hai Duong.
  • We went there by a bus and a coach.
  • I was very tired.
  • I went there late and had dinner late.
  • After that, we took a bath and visited some relatives. They were old.
    • Some of them were my aunts'grandparents.
  • Some of them were my uncles.
  • Some of them were my great grandparents.
  • This morning, my family incensed for one of my grandpas.
  • The weather was sunny.
  • I felt very hot so I didn't go to the cemetery with my dad and my brother.
    • I was at home and drew some guns and a girl.
    • Then, I took the iphone of my cousin and played.
    • We played and had lunch soon because my family must leave soon.
    • We came home by a big coach.
  • It was comfortable.
  • So when I came home, I wasn't tired.

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