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Teks daripada SunnyMasha - English

    • covering letter

    • Dear Mr Cunningham, I am writing to apply for the post of camp monitor advertised on rabota.ru website.
    • I have been working as an English teacher for the last six years.
    • I have a high level of English (CAE certificate, level C1), as I have graduated from the Linguistics University in N.
    • Novgorod and I have worked as a volunteer for an international organization ‘Open House’ in Germany.
    • As you will see from my CV, I have some relevant experience as I worked as a camp monitor in 2015 in the ‘Lazurnii’ camp.
    • I was in charge of organizing aerobics for children in English, which was fun as we used music from all over the world, invented absolutely unbelievable movements.
    • Actually, our aerobics girl’s team was considered to be the fastest in camp’s sporting tournaments.
  • The camp director would be happy to provide a reference.
  • I am very keen on working with children as I find this job rewarding.
  • You get a unique chance to share your knowledge and experience with them.
    • We always keep in touch even after the course.
  • I believe I would be suitable for the job advertised, as apart from my experience, I always welcome a chance to work in a team.
  • Friends characterize me as being friendly and extrovert with good interpersonal skills.
    • I attach a full CV, and if you require any further information, I would be happy to provide it.
    • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • Yours sincerely, Laura Fisher.

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