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    • Correct me ,please!

    • Hello !
    • This is my first time to write the article.If there are any mistakes in it please point out them!
    • I'm a student who is studying in the Hongda Junior high school.Next month I'll become a Grade 9 students and take part in the senior high school entrance examination which examination is called Zhongkao(中考) in Chinese.
    • I have learned English for more than 6 years(from Grade 3 to Grade 8),but now I can only speak and write these simple sentences :(.Maybe this is because I'm not study hard.
    • So...I want to practice my English now and I am looking forward to making a friend who can teach me English.I can also teach you Chinese! :)

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    • This is my first time to write the article.If there are any mistakes in it please point out them!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This is my first time to write thewhen I am writing an article. If there are any mistakes in it then please point out them out !
    • This is my first time to write thean article. (on here/on this website). If there are any mistakes in it please point out them!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I'm a student who is studying in the Hongda Junior high school.Next month I'll become a Grade 9 students and take part in the senior high school entrance examination which examination is called Zhongkao(中考) in Chinese.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'm a student who is studying in the Hongda Junior high school. Next month I'll become a 9th Grade 9 students and take part in the senior high school entrance examination which examination is called Zhongkao(中考) in Chinese.
    • I'm a student who is studying in the Hongda Junior high school. Next month I'll become a Ggrade 9 students and take part in the senior high school entrance examination which examination is called Zhongkao (中考) in Chinese.
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  • câu 4
    • I have learned English for more than 6 years(from Grade 3 to Grade 8),but now I can only speak and write these simple sentences :(.Maybe this is because I'm not study hard.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have learnedt English for more than 6 years (from 3rd Grade 3 to 8th Grade 8),but now I can only speak and write these simple sentences :(.Maybe this is because I'm no don't study hard).
    • I have learned English for more than 6 years (from Ggrade 3 to Ggrade 8), but now I can only speak and write these simple sentences :(. Maybe this is because I'm no don't study hard.
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  • câu 5
    • So...I want to practice my English now and I am looking forward to making a friend who can teach me English.I can also teach you Chinese! :)
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So...I want to practice my English now and I am looking forward to makfingd a friend who can teach me English. I can also teach youhim/her Chinese ! :)
    • So... I want to practice my English now, and I am looking forward to making a friend who can teach me English. I can also teach you Chinese! :)
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