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Hi :)
- Hallo everyone, I'm fabio, I live in Italy and i'm 28 years old.
- I love so much your country. i hope you correct me because my english is very poor :) I love so much play drums and play soccer.
- I hope soon to come there for you and visist several things.
- I love u so much :D

CouldcryApril 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hi :)
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- Hallo everyone, I'm fabio, I live in Italy and i'm 28 years old.
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- Haello everyone, I'm fabio, and I live in Italy and iI'm 28 years old.
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- I love so much your country. i hope you correct me because my english is very poor :) I love so much play drums and play soccer.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I love ~~so much~~ your country so much. iI hope you can correct me because my eEnglish is very poor :)¶I love ~~so much~~to play drums and play soccer very much.
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- I hope soon to come there for you and visist several things.
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- I hope ~~soon~~ to come there soon for you and to visist and see several things.
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- I hope ~~soon to come there for you~~to go there soon and visist/see several things.
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- I love u so much :D
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- I love you so much :D
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