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A day in another country (Part 2)
- When Charlie woke up, the landscape had completely changed.
- Before, there was the city and the streets, the houses, the garden.
- However, now, there was nothing.
- Absolutely nothing.
- Charlie sit up and asked to her father : "Dad ? Where are we ?
- -We're almost there.
- Be quiet for a while, your mother is sleeping.
- And I think your brother too in fact." Charlie looked all around her.
- Her brother James was lying down to the next sit and his mouth was open while he sleeps.
- His father looked tired and exhausted by the long journey.
- Charlie had suddenly an idea. "Dad !
- Do you want me to drive instead of you ?
- You must be very tired !
- -Such an idea !
- I don't think this is the right thing we should do.
- I just think I'm going to have a break.
- Let's do a break, right !
- -Dad, I offer my help.
- I don't do this actually you know...
- I'm more like a selfish person.
- So, you shouldn't refuse it !
- -I know that you're selfish my girl !
- Last time, you wouldn't even let one pillow to your brother while you had five of it because you Saïd that you need all of them !
- Si, don't worry, I know that you're selfish !
- He started to laugh and Charlie insisted : -You're right, but Dad please let me drive !
- -Well well you won.
- I will let you drive when I'll stop. -Thanks you !
- -You're welcome..." Her dad stopped few minutes later and she jumped out of the car before sitting on the driver sit.
- Her father was sitting just after her and she started to drive.
- Charlie was 19.
- She had her driver licence a while ago and, very proud of that, she takes evry opportunity to drive that she have.
- Relieved, Mr McHonchic stated to sleep comforting.
- But after a while, he heard a shout that scared him.
- He opened his eyes pretty fast and feel the car stopped brutally.
- Mrs McHonchic was awoken and that was her who shouts.
- She only was surprised by Charlie driving and hand on her heart, she said : "Don't scared me like that again or I will die !
- -You scared yourself Mom !
- I didn't do anything you know !
- I just propose to Dad to switch and you woke up !"
- Carlillux
June 2016
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