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The music playing in my mind.
- The music playing in my heart, The music makes me who I am, The music, and my life again began.
- The stories coming to my mind, The mood that hidden into heart, The spirit which is leading whole my life, The soul that beeing from the sky.

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- The music playing in my mind.
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- The music playing in my heart, The music makes me who I am, The music, and my life again began.
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- The music playing in my heart,¶The music makes me who I am,¶The music, and my life abegain beagain.
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- The stories coming to my mind, The mood that hidden into heart, The spirit which is leading whole my life, The soul that beeing from the sky.
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- The stories coming to my mind,¶The mood that's hidden into my heart,¶The spirit which is leading my whole my life,¶The soul that ~~beeing~~comes from the sky. ¶
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