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- I hope be the best
- I am 16 years old , I love the english music , I love the movies , and I want to travel to United States .
- That's my dream , but first I must learn english but my economic posibilites don't let me . so i find this site to have friends to other countries and cultures and i hope find new friend who helps me to be the best.

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- I hope be the best
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- I hope to be the best
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- I am 16 years old , I love the english music , I love the movies , and I want to travel to United States .
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- I am 16 years old , I love the eEnglish music , I love the movies , and I want to travel to the United States .
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- I am 16sixteen years old ,. I love ~~the english music ,~~listening to music in English. I love ~~the~~ movies , and I want to travel to the United States .
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- I am 16 years old ,. I love ~~the e~~English music ,. I love the movies , and I w~~ant~~ould like to travel to the United States .
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- That's my dream , but first I must learn english but my economic posibilites don't let me . so i find this site to have friends to other countries and cultures and i hope find new friend who helps me to be the best.
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- That's my dream , but first I must learn eEnglish ~~but~~. However, my economic possibilites don't let me . sSo iI find this site to have friends tofrom other countries and cultures,, and iI hope find new friend who helps me to be the best.
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- That's my dream , but ~~first I must learn english but my economic posibilites~~I know that I must first learn how to communicate in English fluently. My economic situation, however, doesn't ~~let me . so i f~~afford me that chance. Thus, I am ind this site to ~~have~~find friends tofrom other countries and cultures, and iI hope I could find new friends who can helps me ~~to be the~~achieve my best.
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- That's my dream , ~~but first I mu~~however I must first learn eEnglish ~~but~~. Because my economic ~~posibilites~~situation doesn't ~~let me . so i fi~~allow me to, I have found this website tso thavt I can make friends tofrom other countries and cultures ~~and i~~. I hope to find new friends who are able helps me to be the best.
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I hope be the best

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