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    • My town

    • Hi, I'am Olsen and my native town il Lastourville in Gabon (Africa country).
    • My town is so beautifull, so quiet in the morning, from the afternoon to the next morning, young people are out, speaking, playing, dancing and having fun. i like go to my country on holidays with my parents and all my brothers for one month, is so great.
    • It's like all town is my parents, i meet people who know me but i don't know them, old guys who told you when you were a baby.

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    • My town is so beautifull, so quiet in the morning, from the afternoon to the next morning, young people are out, speaking, playing, dancing and having fun. i like go to my country on holidays with my parents and all my brothers for one month, is so great.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My town is so beautifull, and it is so quiet in the morning, f. From the afternoon tountil morning of the next morningday, young people are out, spea talking, playing, dancing, and having fun. iI like gto visito my country on holidays with my parents and all my brothers for one month, i. Even for just a month, the experience is always so great.
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    • It's like all town is my parents, i meet people who know me but i don't know them, old guys who told you when you were a baby.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It's like allas though everyone in town is my parents, i. I meet people who know me, but iI don't know them, old guys who told you when you were. These are old people who knew me when I was still a baby. ¶
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