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    • On the eve of the French revolution in 1789, there were severe restrictions on Jewish activity across all over Europe.
    • For instance in German Frankfurt Jewish communities had to live according to strict rules, which were constituted in the Middle Ages.
    • Approximately 500 Jewish households dwelt in the city, all of them occupied special district, which was walled off from the rest city and called «Judengasse» or «Jewish street».
    • The Jewish had no right to leave the ghetto at night, on Sundays or on Christian holidays.
  • Jewish streets were tremendously cramped.
    • The jewish lived under permanent oppression.
    • Each 2 year the ghetto could shelter no more than 2 families, moreover only 20 couples were allowed to get married and only if both of them were older than 25 years old.
    • The jewish were strictly forbidden to engage in farming and arms, spices, wine, grain trade.
    • Until 1726, they had to have special distinctive marks.
    • But All of a sudden changed when Napoleon came, he abolished obsolete, inefficient social institutions…to be continued:)

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    • On the eve of the French revolution in 1789, there were severe restrictions on Jewish activity across all over Europe.
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    • On the eve of the French revolution in 1789, there were severe restrictions on Jewish activity across all over Europe.
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    • On the eve of the French rRevolution in 1789, there were severe restrictions on the Jewish activityies across all over Europe.
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    • For instance in German Frankfurt Jewish communities had to live according to strict rules, which were constituted in the Middle Ages.
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    • For instance in Germany's Frankfurt Jewish communities had to live according to strict rules, which were constituted in the Middle Ages.
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    • For instance, in Germany, Frankfurt the Jewish communities had to live according to the strict rules, which were constituted in the Middle Ages.
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    • Approximately 500 Jewish households dwelt in the city, all of them occupied special district, which was walled off from the rest city and called «Judengasse» or «Jewish street».
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    • Approximately 500 Jewish households dweltled in the city, all of them occupied special district, which was walled off from the rest of the city and called «Judengasse» or «Jewish street».
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    • Approximately 500 Jewish households dweltled in the city, a. All of them occupied a special district, which was walled off from the rest of the city and was called «Judengasse» or «Jewish street».
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    • Each 2 year the ghetto could shelter no more than 2 families, moreover only 20 couples were allowed to get married and only if both of them were older than 25 years old.
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    • Each 2very second year the ghetto could shelter no more than 2 families, m. Moreover, only 20 couples were allowed to get married and only if both of them were older than 25 years old.
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    • The jewish were strictly forbidden to engage in farming and arms, spices, wine, grain trade.
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    • The jJewishs were strictly forbidden to engage in farming and arms,y. They were also not allowed to trade with spices, wine, or grain trade.
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    • But All of a sudden changed when Napoleon came, he abolished obsolete, inefficient social institutions…to be continued:)
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