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  • Cover letter (v2)

    • I wish to work in the field of industrial acoustics and the position you advertised caught my attention.
  • Indeed, this function as well as the interest that your company shows in innovation and R&D are consistent with my professional expectations.
    • Graduated from the *** in mechanical engineering, I have acquired extensive knowledge in acoustic and industrial vibrations.
    • This education has been enhanced by the completion of a final internship in aircraft engine rotors simulation, and a PhD in acoustic treatments used in aircraft engine nacelles.
    • Furthermore, my professional experience and my three years of thesis have developed my capacity to manage research projects.
  • I hope that your company would allow me to apply my technical knowledge and to contribute to projects in an area that fascinates me.
    • I am confident that my skills and rigors will meet your expectations.
  • Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
  • Best Regards,

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Indeed, this function as well as the interest that your company shows in innovation and R&D are consistent with my professional expectations.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Graduated from the *** in mechanical engineering, I have acquired extensive knowledge in acoustic and industrial vibrations.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • GI graduated from the *** in mechanical engineering, I have acquired extensive knowledge in acoustic and industrial vibrations.
      miss_dankwanseremiss_dankwansere profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • GHaving graduated from the *** in mechanical engineering, I have acquired extensive knowledge in acoustic and industrial vibrations.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • This education has been enhanced by the completion of a final internship in aircraft engine rotors simulation, and a PhD in acoustic treatments used in aircraft engine nacelles.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This education has been enhanced by the completion of a final internship in aircraft engine's rotors simulation, and a PhD in acoustic treatments used in aircraft engine nacelozzles.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Furthermore, my professional experience and my three years of thesis have developed my capacity to manage research projects.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Furthermore, my professional experience and my three years of thesis have developed my capacability to manage research projects.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I hope that your company would allow me to apply my technical knowledge and to contribute to projects in an area that fascinates me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9