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• I come from Nancy.

• It's a city in France.

• I write this paragraph because i want to know if i make a lot of mistake in English !

• I'm student in computer science.

• I like sport : ski, climbing and a lot of other.

• When it's summer holiday, i work in a factory who make granit stone working.

• I have too put the big rocks on a conveyor belt and after the machine can work.

• When it's finished, i take the rocks and put those on wooden pallet.

• And when it's winter holiday, i work in a ski resort.

• I'm ski instructor.

• The both allow me to have more money for school period.