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- Hello !
- I come from Nancy.
- It's a city in France.
- I write this paragraph because i want to know if i make a lot of mistake in English !
- I'm student in computer science.
- I like sport : ski, climbing and a lot of other.
- When it's summer holiday, i work in a factory who make granit stone working.
- I have too put the big rocks on a conveyor belt and after the machine can work.
- When it's finished, i take the rocks and put those on wooden pallet.
- And when it's winter holiday, i work in a ski resort.
- I'm ski instructor.
- The both allow me to have more money for school period.
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English