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- PHILOSOPHY: MOTORS is a company that seeks to promote road safety culture that makes it through the sale of its motorcycle, when the customer buys one of the products AKT will provide a course of free driving.
PROPOSAL: Our team can improve the following aspects: •Damage to the parts of the bike •Efficiency tying motorcycles •Space optimization inside trucks

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- PHILOSOPHY: MOTORS is a company that seeks to promote road safety culture that makes it through the sale of its motorcycle, when the customer buys one of the products AKT will provide a course of free driving.
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- PHILOSOPHY: MOTORS is a company that seeks to promote road safety culture ~~that makes it~~ through the sale of its motorcycle~~, w~~. When the customer buys one of the products AKT will provide a driving course ofor free ~~driving~~.
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- PROPOSAL: Our team can improve the following aspects: •Damage to the parts of the bike •Efficiency tying motorcycles •Space optimization inside trucks
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