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Văn bản từ Luisr_ramirez - English

    • Cover letter

    • I'm passionate about entrepreneurship move fast and break things is amoung my favorite quotes, a cuople years ago I try to create a company with a classmate, and we miserably failed, one of the best experience in my life, a tough one I must say.
    • One of the more important things I learned from that experience is that you have to have not only the passion and the will, but the knowledge and lidership to make things happend.
    • Last year I joined to AIESEC, a great organization with excellent people that allows you to develop leadership, I was way out of my comfort zone while I was there, I'm more an introvert type of person and that's not the way AIESEC works, in there I've improved my conmunications skills, the ability to make decicions under presure and I have met people I hope to keep in touch within the years.
    • Now I'm about to get my bachelor in electrical engineering, I'll present my final project at the end of the month I with it reach my degree.
    • I belive that engineering among few other carrers puts you in that sweet spot bettween theory an practice that allows you to solve problems and make a real impact in whatever you decide to do.
    • I enjoy to learn and play with things, robotics as electronics are a pleasure them everything connects with programming where the internet of things an data comes into play.
    • I'm currently working part time with a company where I made python scripts to collect and clean data, In the meantime I'm learning the basic of machine learning on my own and try to apply them in every change I have, ethier relate variables of an electrical system, to thing in a every day life issue as a multidimentional problem with multiple solutions local minimums that can trick you if you don;t look at the big picture, or just because it's fun.
    • Of course there are barriers and limitations on this approach, the bigger one is the lack of mentorship to know the path to follow and the feedback to make an efficient progress.
    • In venezuela machine learning isn't a popular field neither in industry nor in academics so it's hard to make a career in it and due the absurdly high exchange rates it's not possible to afford and online education program, at the current rate exchange a year income can hardly reach 1000$.
    • In my current work I do not have a schedule, since I'm working remotely there are importance time diference that make hard schedule calls and meetings so my schedule is self paced, I have been working this way for about 6 months now and It has been quite an experience from which I'm learning a lot.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • I'm passionate about entrepreneurship move fast and break things is amoung my favorite quotes, a cuople years ago I try to create a company with a classmate, and we miserably failed, one of the best experience in my life, a tough one I must say.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'm passionate about entrepreneurship move fast and break things is amoung my favorite quotes, a cuouple of years ago I try to create a company with amy classmate, and we miserably failed, one of the best experience in my life, a tough one I must say.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • One of the more important things I learned from that experience is that you have to have not only the passion and the will, but the knowledge and lidership to make things happend.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One of the more important things I learned from that experience is that you have to have not only the passion and the will, but the knowledge and lieadership to make things happend.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Last year I joined to AIESEC, a great organization with excellent people that allows you to develop leadership, I was way out of my comfort zone while I was there, I'm more an introvert type of person and that's not the way AIESEC works, in there I've improved my conmunications skills, the ability to make decicions under presure and I have met people I hope to keep in touch within the years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Last year I joined to AIESEC, a great organization with excellent people that allows you to develop leadership, I was way out of my comfort zone while I was there, I'm more an introvert type of person and that's not the way AIESEC works, in there I've improved my conmmunications skills, the ability to make decicsions under pressure and I have met people I hope to keep in touch within the years.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Now I'm about to get my bachelor in electrical engineering, I'll present my final project at the end of the month I with it reach my degree.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now I'm about to get my bachelor in electrical engineering, I'll present my final project at the end of the month I with it I reach my degree.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I belive that engineering among few other carrers puts you in that sweet spot bettween theory an practice that allows you to solve problems and make a real impact in whatever you decide to do.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I believe that engineering among few other carriers puts you in that sweet spot bettween theory and practice that allows you to solve problems and make a real impact in whatever you decide to do.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I enjoy to learn and play with things, robotics as electronics are a pleasure them everything connects with programming where the internet of things an data comes into play.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I enjoy to learn and play with things, robotics as electronics are a pleasure them everything connects with programming where the internet of things and data comes into play.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I'm currently working part time with a company where I made python scripts to collect and clean data, In the meantime I'm learning the basic of machine learning on my own and try to apply them in every change I have, ethier relate variables of an electrical system, to thing in a every day life issue as a multidimentional problem with multiple solutions local minimums that can trick you if you don;t look at the big picture, or just because it's fun.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'm currently working part time with a company where I made python scripts to collect and clean data, In the meantime I'm learning the basic of machine learning on my own and try to apply them in every change I have, eithier relate variables of an electrical system, to thing in a every day life issue as a multidimentsional problem with multiple solutions local minimums that can trick you if you don;t look at the big picture, or just because it's fun.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Of course there are barriers and limitations on this approach, the bigger one is the lack of mentorship to know the path to follow and the feedback to make an efficient progress.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Of course, there are barriers and limitations on this approach, the bigger one is the lack of mentorship to know the path to follow and the feedback to make an efficient progress.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • In venezuela machine learning isn't a popular field neither in industry nor in academics so it's hard to make a career in it and due the absurdly high exchange rates it's not possible to afford and online education program, at the current rate exchange a year income can hardly reach 1000$.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In vVenezuela machine learning isn't a popular field neither in the industry nor in academics so it's hard to make a career in it and due the absurdly high exchange rates it's not possible to afford and online education program, at the current rate exchange, a year income can hardly reach 1000$.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • In my current work I do not have a schedule, since I'm working remotely there are importance time diference that make hard schedule calls and meetings so my schedule is self paced, I have been working this way for about 6 months now and It has been quite an experience from which I'm learning a lot.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In my current work, I do not have a schedule, since I'm working remotely there are importance time difference that makes hard schedule calls and meetings so my schedule is self -paced, I have been working this way for about 6 months now and It has been quite an experience from which I'm learning a lot.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10