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    • How can differences enrich people's relationship ?

    • There are many differences (cultures) in a same country.
  • It's commonly said that differences can enrich people's relationships.
    • First, we shall see that pratice sports and hobbies enrich relationships.
    • Secondly, we shall analyze the effect of acquisition of knowlodges.
    • At the first, it's beneficial for people who practice ports and hobbies because they share news activities with other peolple.
  • Moreover, they have a better health.
  • Furthermore, people develop pleasure and fun.
    • Secondly, when people acquire knowledges, they become more intelligent, it allows then to take better decision.
    • Besides, they have better understanding and better jobs.
    • As a result, there is a confrontation between differnts points of view.
  • They become more tolerant.
  • So they are open-minded.
  • Moreover, they accept differences and there are fewer conflicts.
    • To conclude, all differences enrich people's relationships because it permits to people to learn new knowledges, share new activities.
  • That's why people become more tolerant.
  • Yet, we know that differences create a lot of conflicts such as wars and discrimination...

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