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    • April 3th

    • Today is Wednesday, Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: men I have passed the exam, then, he said to me, "compa, wait for me and go to stadium".
    • well after we went walk to the gate with other friend and we took a bikes. well, when we were in the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend, "do you want a milk shake?".
    • When I had already drunk I said : "I have never drunk such a tasty drink" But the wrong way was that we have returned home walking.

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    • Today is Wednesday, Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: men I have passed the exam, then, he said to me, "compa, wait for me and go to stadium".
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    • Today is Wednesday,. Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics, I met a friend and I have told: mentold him, "Man, I have passed the exam, t." Then, he said to me, "cCompa, wait for me and go to the stadium".
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    • Today is Wednesday, .Today when I had got out of discrete mathematics exam , I met a friend and I have told: mentold him:" Man , I have passed the exam, t." Then, he said to me, "cCompa, wait for me and we will go to stadium together".
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    • well after we went walk to the gate with other friend and we took a bikes. well, when we were in the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend, "do you want a milk shake?".
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    • ¶wWell, after that, we went walking to the gate with other friend and we took aour bikes. well, w When we were in the stadium a car had crashed into another car and my friend said, "dDo you want a milk shake?".
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    • ¶wWell after that , we went walking to the gate with other friends and then we took a bikes. wWell, when we were ingoing to the stadium a car had crashed other car and my friend said, "do you want a milk shake?".
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    • ¶well after we wThen both of us and another frientd walking to gethe gate with other friend and wer toward the gate, took asome bikes from there. wWell, when we wereduring our watching in the stadium a car had crashed to other car and my friend, meanwhile said: "do you want a milk shake?".”?!
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    • When I had already drunk I said : "I have never drunk such a tasty drink" But the wrong way was that we have returned home walking.
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    • When I had already drunkAfter I finished my milk shake, I said :, "I have never drunkhad such a tasty drink"." But the wrong way was that we have returned home walking. [I don't understand the last sentence.]
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    • When I had already drunkdrank it , I said :, "I have never drunk such a tasty drink" .But the wrong waything was that we have returned home walking. ¶
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