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    • The text is about a person who is interested in a job because he is looking for an opportunity to use the knowledge that he learned in a 16 week part-time accounting course, in that course he used a wide range of computer packages, he learned how to work under pressure and he was able to work alone with very little extra help besides he could always completed his work on time, and he said that he passed the course with merit that’s why he believed in his skills.
    • Unfortunately, the course didn’t include a work placement so he couldn’t practice his skills for that reason he is looking for an opportunity to improve himself.

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