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I am going to talk about the idea of progress.

So first, I'd like to give a short definition of progress.

So progress refers to an idea of an improvment, an evolution to something new and often better than before but it appears sometimes than some progress have significant disadvantages, especially in science, which is a field really affected by progress.

So, is progress always a good thing ?

To answer this question, I will take the example of a significant progress that is now part of our lives, the internet and I will first speak about the advantages and the about the disadvantages.