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    • CCTV cameras

    • I am going to speak about places and form of power.
    • First of all, I would define power as the ability for someone or something to influence or even control people's life and behaviour.
    • This notion can be illustrated with the controversial of CCTV cameras in Great Britain with the following issue : « is the british society constantly being watched ? ».
    • First, I am going to show the fear of a surveillance society through the novel 1984, and then I will speak about the reality in Great Britain.

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    • First of all, I would define power as the ability for someone or something to influence or even control people's life and behaviour.
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    • First of all, I would define power as the ability ofor someone or something to influence or even control people's lifeves and behaviour.
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    • This notion can be illustrated with the controversial of CCTV cameras in Great Britain with the following issue : « is the british society constantly being watched ? ».
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    • This notion can be illustrated with theby the controversy (or controversial use) of CCTV cameras in Great Britain with the following issue : « i"Is the bBritish society constantly being watched ? ».?"
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    • First, I am going to show the fear of a surveillance society through the novel 1984, and then I will speak about the reality in Great Britain.
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    • First, I am going to show the fear of a how a society fears surveillance society through the novel 1984, and then I will speak about the reality in Great Britain.
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