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    • To be honest I am not that friendly cause I am so picky.I like talking with you too.Last week was my exam week thus i have one exam in this week too.
    • As if you are your horoscope is airies, right?
    • I know some people don't beleive in horoscope.As the Turks say ; Don't believe in fortunes, but don't get stuck without one :D Yes my personality.I am so great person ahaha (Joke of course I know nobody is perfect :D) people around me says about me how messy, unconcerned person I am. and they say that I am so smart( I don't say that, it's opinion of people.
    • I dont want you think stuffed shirt about me) When it comes to question ; what I want from life?
    • I want every my dreams would come true what I want to.But It is not possible of course!
    • However, dreams stay as dream unless we don't make them our plans.
    • This is my plan; I want to be academician at my university.
  • I hope everything goes well.
    • Actually don't call yourself as terrible musician.Because nobody borns with great skills in their mom's venter lol.Something that can be developed with time.To give an example of myself; I was so terrible at the first days of my school in this art school.Everybody was shocked on that how did I pass aptitude test.And people always asked me why the hell I am in this school.
    • (I was geek student in highschool and my school was highqualited science school.) But I told them I love it and I want to be an artist. by the time I improved my skills.

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  • câu 1
    • To be honest I am not that friendly cause I am so picky.I like talking with you too.Last week was my exam week thus i have one exam in this week too.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To be honest, I am not that much friendly cause I am so picky.I like talking with you too.Last week was my exam week thus iand I have one exam in this week too.
    • To be honest, I am not that friendly because I am so picky. I like talking with you, too. Last week was my exam week, thus iI have one exam in this week, too.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 3
    • I know some people don't beleive in horoscope.As the Turks say ; Don't believe in fortunes, but don't get stuck without one :D Yes my personality.I am so great person ahaha (Joke of course I know nobody is perfect :D) people around me says about me how messy, unconcerned person I am. and they say that I am so smart( I don't say that, it's opinion of people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I know some people don't beleieve in horoscope. As the Turks say ; Don't believe in fortunes, but don't get stuck without one :D¶¶Yes about my personality. I am so great as a person ahaha (Joke of course I know nobody is perfect :D) people around me says about me how messy, unconcerned person I am. aAnd they say that I am so smart( I don't say that, it's opinion of people).
    • I know some people don't beleive in horoscope.s. As the Turks say ; , "Don't believe in fortunes, but don't get stuck without one :D."¶¶Yes, about my personality.: I am so great a person (Hahaha (J... that's a joke of course. I know nobody is perfect :D) p!) People around me says about me, how messy, and unconcerned a person I am. aAnd they say that I am so smart(. I don't say that, it's opinion of other people.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 4
    • I dont want you think stuffed shirt about me) When it comes to question ; what I want from life?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I don't want you to think about my stuffed shirt about me).¶¶¶When it comes to question ; what I want from life?
    • I dont want you think that I am a stuffed shirt about me)¶¶¶When it comes to question ; what. What do I want from life?
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 5
    • I want every my dreams would come true what I want to.But It is not possible of course!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I wantish that my every my dreams would come true w; that I want to. do. But It is not possible of course!
    • I want everyall of my dreams wouldto come true whatabout the things I want to. do. But It is not possible, of course!
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 9
    • Actually don't call yourself as terrible musician.Because nobody borns with great skills in their mom's venter lol.Something that can be developed with time.To give an example of myself; I was so terrible at the first days of my school in this art school.Everybody was shocked on that how did I pass aptitude test.And people always asked me why the hell I am in this school.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Actually don't call yourself as terrible musician.Because nobody is borns with great skills in their mom's venter lol.S.It is something that can be developed with time.To give an example of myself; I was so terrible at the first days of my school in this art school. Everybody was shocked on that how did I pass the aptitude test. And people always asked me why the hell I am in this school.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • (I was geek student in highschool and my school was highqualited science school.) But I told them I love it and I want to be an artist. by the time I improved my skills.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • (I was geek student in high school and my school was a highqualily rated science school.) But I told them I love it and I want to be an artist. byIn the mean the time I improved my skills. ¶
    • (I was geek student in high school and my school was a high qualitedy science school.) But I told them I love it and I want to be an artist. by the time I after I have improved my skills. ¶
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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