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- Hello
- I'm Kelly, I'm want learn talking about English well.
- But, I'm not very strong.

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- Hello
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- Hello ¶I'm Kelly, I want to learn talking in english well, but i'm not very good.
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- I'm Kelly, I'm want learn talking about English well.
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- I'm Kelly, I'm want to learn ~~talking about~~how to speak English ~~well~~fluently.
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- I'm Kelly, I~~'m want learn talking about English well~~ would like to learn how to speak English correctly.
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- I'm Kelly, ~~I'm want learn talking about~~and I'd like to improve my English ~~well~~.
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- But, I'm not very strong.
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- But, I'm not ~~very strong.~~familiar with this language at all
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- Bbut~~, I'm not very strong.~~ my english is poor
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- ~~But, I'm not very strong.~~
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- ~~But, I'm~~However, my English is not very ~~strong~~good.
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