Pataisymai

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    • The inexorable process of collecting significant information about environment with analyzing and learning has been loaded to humanity brain since ancient time.
    • Subconsiousessly, we have been gathering incoming data with a goal to provide and set up the best conditions for our and our keen's life improvements.
  • For simplicity it calls study.
    • But how a method of receiving information would affects quality of understanding?
  • That's absolutely depends on a source of information, and we could divide the method of obtaining for a two groups, which are relevant to type of data flow source - with involving a person by whom we are being taught or ingest and manage knowledge by own.
  • In this case the scale for precisions evaluation volume, quality, completeness of intelligence will determine the method of obtaining.
  • In my view, with time passing by and with our upbringing, plenty number of transformations happened in our attitude to learning information.
  • Methamorphosis passes in two stages that disclosed below.
  • Childhood is an wonderful period of forming our own consciousness, therefore for this time a personality in mostly cases relay on opinion of experienced community members.
  • And if we are taking some actions to discover something, generally it was a product of our curiosity, and often the results of statement are not being profoundly estimated by our mind.
  • Such level of awareness could be characterized rather as seeking firstly for momentum of joy, neither as a part of developing strategy.
  • Evidentially at this stage learning from teacher is more applicable.
  • As opposed for the teen age, when adolescence goes to past, mind leads us to learn and study environment not by piece of curiosity, but more as a important part of long-term goals realization.
  • Consciousness has took a top role in a mindsets managing, all earth laws have been mastered successfully, and necessity of study only through private experience occupies the primary place in a life.
  • Naturally, financial aspect of existence appears, and taking it into consideration also provides us with enormous power and motivation learn and study without engaging people, because it would cost and apparently more beneficial to devise diverse number of knowledge fields using only own brain and perception.
  • By the way of conclusion, collecting pointed facts I thought an method of most effective achieving information strictly depends on age of a subject, and more experienced personality is than study in solitude without any mentors will become more preferable.

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    • The inexorable process of collecting significant information about environment with analyzing and learning has been loaded to humanity brain since ancient time.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • The inexorable process of collecting significant information about the environment with analyzing and learning has been loaded toingrained in the humanity brain since ancient times.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Subconsiousessly, we have been gathering incoming data with a goal to provide and set up the best conditions for our and our keen's life improvements.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • Subconsciousessly, we have been gathering incoming data with athe goal tof provideing and setting up the best conditions for our and our keen's life improvementimproving our lives.
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  • Sentence 5
    • That's absolutely depends on a source of information, and we could divide the method of obtaining for a two groups, which are relevant to type of data flow source - with involving a person by whom we are being taught or ingest and manage knowledge by own.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • In this case the scale for precisions evaluation volume, quality, completeness of intelligence will determine the method of obtaining.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • In my view, with time passing by and with our upbringing, plenty number of transformations happened in our attitude to learning information.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
    • Childhood is an wonderful period of forming our own consciousness, therefore for this time a personality in mostly cases relay on opinion of experienced community members.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • And if we are taking some actions to discover something, generally it was a product of our curiosity, and often the results of statement are not being profoundly estimated by our mind.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • Such level of awareness could be characterized rather as seeking firstly for momentum of joy, neither as a part of developing strategy.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
  • Sentence 13
    • As opposed for the teen age, when adolescence goes to past, mind leads us to learn and study environment not by piece of curiosity, but more as a important part of long-term goals realization.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13
  • Sentence 14
    • Consciousness has took a top role in a mindsets managing, all earth laws have been mastered successfully, and necessity of study only through private experience occupies the primary place in a life.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 14
  • Sentence 15
    • Naturally, financial aspect of existence appears, and taking it into consideration also provides us with enormous power and motivation learn and study without engaging people, because it would cost and apparently more beneficial to devise diverse number of knowledge fields using only own brain and perception.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 15
  • Sentence 16
    • By the way of conclusion, collecting pointed facts I thought an method of most effective achieving information strictly depends on age of a subject, and more experienced personality is than study in solitude without any mentors will become more preferable.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16