Korreksies

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  • The velocity of humanity's development process has been stiffly multiplied since the implementation of blade-edge technologies.
  • Naturally, aftermaths and consequences of that changes adroitly grasp their own place in each of citizenships in raw of highly developed countries and cities.
  • Reflection of that transformation after entering era of information, could be easily spouted in overpatching for worker's common life schedules and timetables.
  • Nowadays, a successful personalities does not have even a time for cooking a meal, more and more number of people are staying in a case of emergency.
  • Priority of ingesting food at home has been going gradually in past.
  • The necessity of fast lunch is shoving to idea of visiting junk food and restaurants.
  • Obviously the famous dependency told us that demand burn supply, compels construction industry to devise projects for building food courts.
  • Apparently, the pointed situation are widespread and presented entirely in heavy industry oriented city of mine.
  • And the question about foundation of restaurant in my neighborhood annually becomes increasingly actual for city's authorities.
  • However, beforehand of asserting a restaurant construction, I believe that all cons and pros should being weighted and appraised firmly.
  • And the first fact, that needs to be taken into consideration, is citizenship's approximate revenue and inhering to class of income.
  • Analyzing of public opinion and expenses show us the obvious correlation between people classes and class of demanded food court for a certain area.
  • Nearest territory of neighborhood had been planning even before world war 2 as an locus of factory's workers accomodation, because the area has been aimed for foundation of an aviation factory , which building has been successfully completed at 1939 year.
  • In a presence of fact, that from practically 20 thousands town folks about 10 more or less are being engaged in elaboration for factory and average income of does not supply them with an opportunity of weekly nutrition in a restaurant.
  • As an addition, more than half morosely pull their mortgage credits.
  • Consequences of that actions provides us with an significant occasion for doubt in validity of a restaurant building.
  • For achieving most effective conclusion, for another scale the indisputable fact should be placed - every new facility and company building represent a perfect feasibility to work, provides city with plenty number of work places, and probably, allows to fulfill potential passion and desire for some citizienships, whose only had been dreaming previously about being involved in such consumer oriented business as restaurant is.
  • And I believe, that path of presenting more dimensions, extension for urban's to grow up, is a crucial point for reducing criminality situation, take a win in a struggle for clear and legal labor market and utterly in city developing.
  • By the way of conclusion, responding to question, I would like to offer for our authorities be more proactive and initiate evaluation the situation in generally due to performing vote list.
  • It should contents of information about planning restaurant, what benefits for people will be performed, occupations, average salary level.
  • Establishing interaction and cooperation with a lot of references with urban community allows us to make the most effective decision related to restaurant constructing.
  • And gives us a powerful leverage for improving our life conditions.

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    • Naturally, aftermaths and consequences of that changes adroitly grasp their own place in each of citizenships in raw of highly developed countries and cities.
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2
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    • Reflection of that transformation after entering era of information, could be easily spouted in overpatching for worker's common life schedules and timetables.
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
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    • Nowadays, a successful personalities does not have even a time for cooking a meal, more and more number of people are staying in a case of emergency.
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4
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    • Nearest territory of neighborhood had been planning even before world war 2 as an locus of factory's workers accomodation, because the area has been aimed for foundation of an aviation factory , which building has been successfully completed at 1939 year.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 13VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 13
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    • In a presence of fact, that from practically 20 thousands town folks about 10 more or less are being engaged in elaboration for factory and average income of does not supply them with an opportunity of weekly nutrition in a restaurant.
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 14VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 14
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    • For achieving most effective conclusion, for another scale the indisputable fact should be placed - every new facility and company building represent a perfect feasibility to work, provides city with plenty number of work places, and probably, allows to fulfill potential passion and desire for some citizienships, whose only had been dreaming previously about being involved in such consumer oriented business as restaurant is.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 17VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 17
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    • And I believe, that path of presenting more dimensions, extension for urban's to grow up, is a crucial point for reducing criminality situation, take a win in a struggle for clear and legal labor market and utterly in city developing.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 18VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 18
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    • By the way of conclusion, responding to question, I would like to offer for our authorities be more proactive and initiate evaluation the situation in generally due to performing vote list.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 19VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 19
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    • Establishing interaction and cooperation with a lot of references with urban community allows us to make the most effective decision related to restaurant constructing.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 21VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 21
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