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Κείμενο από oliks - English

  • Correct my story, please

  • It was a normal charter flight to Hurgada.
  • I flew to work, the mood was good.
  • My neighbour asked me to change places with her.
  • She wanted to seat next to the window very much.
  • I did not care.
  • So I took her seat.
  • Everything was going smoothly.
  • Passengers were out of their seats.
  • I was going to have a nap when my neighbour asked me to look at the window.
  • I saw frequent outbreaks of light.
  • They appeared one by one.
  • And it seemed they passed very close to our plane.
  • I have never seen this before.
  • But it didn’t look like lightning.
  • My neighbour panicked, the panic passed on me.
  • We both began to think that we flew over the rocket attacks area.
  • We called the flight attendant for explanations.
  • Flight attendant looked at the window and calmly said that it was a thunderstorm.
  • With a smile on her face she advised us to close the window.
  • We followed her advice, but my neighbour opened the window every five minutes.
  • It made me nervous.
  • Finally flash ended.
  • It’s strange but no one else paid attention to the window flash.
  • A few days later, I heard on the news that civil aviation was banned from flying over the area of rocket attacks… And I still ask myself: «Whether it was a thunderstorm?»

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English