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    • Green technologies

    • To continue to develop and use the earth's resources it is important to protect our planet.
    • Countries and different companies need to use more green technologies to respect nature.
    • Skip to green energy cost money as well as each country to generate funds like Australia where “The Turnbull government is setting up a new $1bn clean energy fund alongside the Clean Energy Finance Corporation to lend to, or take an equity stake, in emerging technologies.” Several solutions are available to be greener.
    • First we must limit the production of nuclear electricity.
    • To overcome this problem is to use less energy consuming bulbs is considered.
    • Each country has political for example “the U.S. government banned many energy-guzzling incandescent light bulbs at the beginning of 2014 in favor of compact fluorescents and LEDs.” The problem of the LED is its price.
    • However the LED uses 80% less energy to produce the same amount of light as well, it is a way forward.
  • Financial plans were established like the banker JPMorgan Chase: “Last month, he announced a deal with Current, a newly formed unit of General Electric, under which Current will plan, manage, and help finance the installation of 1.4 million superefficient light-emitting diodes at some 5,000 of the bank’s branches over the next two years.” The second challenge is to find solutions to the major problems of pollution as cars concern.
  • To limit the impact on the environment, new engines are appearing in cars.
  • It is a hybrid engine: a power section and a combustor.
  • The performance remains optimal and electric sports car races have been established as in Beijing in September or leave a Formula E race.
  • “Within a few years the electric cars may be able to maintain similar speeds and race lengths as Formula One cars.” Tesla Motors has also planned battery production for electric vehicles.
  • “The company also announced a new line of rechargeable batteries that would store solar energy and power homes and businesses.” Finally use green technologies is a work every day.
  • Everyone can try to preserve the planet.
  • People consume far.
  • For example: "The average person in the U.S. produces about 4.4 pounds of trash a day." In previous years, only a third of its waste was recycled.
  • “Several cities have instituted far-reaching composting and recycling programs to help cut back on waste and keep food scraps out of landfills.” The use of solar panels and wind turbines extends increasingly but still progress to make in spite of a significant improvement.
  • To preserve the planet, I think the use of greener technologies has become indispensable.
  • Everyone can decide to consume more responsible products and companies turn more to the ecology.
  • It is important to contribute at their respective levels for the protection of our environment.

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  • câu 1
    • To continue to develop and use the earth's resources it is important to protect our planet.
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    • To continue to develop and use the earth's resources it is important to protect our planetdünyanın kaynaklarını kullanmak ve geliştirmeye devam etmek, gezegenimizi korumak için önemlidir.
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    • To continue to, develop and use the earth's resourcesnatural resources of the earth, it is important to protect our planet.
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    • Countries and different companies need to use more green technologies to respect nature.
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    • Countries and different companies need to use more greençeşitli şirket ve ülkeler, doğaya saygı için daha çevreci techknologies to respect natureji kullanmaya ihtiyacı vardır.
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    • Countries and different companies need to use more and more green technologies to respect the nature.
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    • Skip to green energy cost money as well as each country to generate funds like Australia where “The Turnbull government is setting up a new $1bn clean energy fund alongside the Clean Energy Finance Corporation to lend to, or take an equity stake, in emerging technologies.” Several solutions are available to be greener.
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    • SkipChanging to green energy costs money as well as each country having to generate funds like Australia where “The Turnbull government is setting up a new $1bn clean energy fund alongside the Clean Energy Finance Corporation to lend to, or take an equity stake, in emerging technologies.” Several solutions are available to bemake ourselves greener.
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    • To overcome this problem is to use less energy consuming bulbs is considered.
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    • To overcome this problem is to use less energy consuming bulbs is consideredbu sorunun çözümü için daha az enerji kullanan lambaları kullanmayı düşünebiliriz.
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    • To overcome this problem is to use lesswe might consider using fewer energy -consuming bulbs is considered.
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    • Each country has political for example “the U.S. government banned many energy-guzzling incandescent light bulbs at the beginning of 2014 in favor of compact fluorescents and LEDs.” The problem of the LED is its price.
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    • Each country has political for exampleissues, such as “the U.S. government banned many energy-guzzling incandescent light bulbs at the beginning of 2014 in favor of compact fluorescents and LEDs.” The problem of the LED is its price.
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    • However the LED uses 80% less energy to produce the same amount of light as well, it is a way forward.
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    • However the LED uses 80% less energy to produce the same amount of light as well, it is a way forwardLED lambalar %80 daha az enerji kullansada bu ileriye doğru bir adımdır.
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    • Financial plans were established like the banker JPMorgan Chase: “Last month, he announced a deal with Current, a newly formed unit of General Electric, under which Current will plan, manage, and help finance the installation of 1.4 million superefficient light-emitting diodes at some 5,000 of the bank’s branches over the next two years.” The second challenge is to find solutions to the major problems of pollution as cars concern.
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    • The performance remains optimal and electric sports car races have been established as in Beijing in September or leave a Formula E race.
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    • “Within a few years the electric cars may be able to maintain similar speeds and race lengths as Formula One cars.” Tesla Motors has also planned battery production for electric vehicles.
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    • “The company also announced a new line of rechargeable batteries that would store solar energy and power homes and businesses.” Finally use green technologies is a work every day.
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    • For example: "The average person in the U.S. produces about 4.4 pounds of trash a day." In previous years, only a third of its waste was recycled.
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    • “Several cities have instituted far-reaching composting and recycling programs to help cut back on waste and keep food scraps out of landfills.” The use of solar panels and wind turbines extends increasingly but still progress to make in spite of a significant improvement.
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