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Hi, my name is Ruslan.
- This is main fyrst attempt at writing.
- I`m live in South Ural in a industrial city Chelyabinsk.
- I`m working the programmer.

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- Hello world!
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- Hello world!¶¶Hi my name is Ruslan. This is my first attempt at writing.¶I live in south Ural in the industrial city Chelyabinsk. I am working as a programmer.
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câu 1
- Hi, my name is Ruslan.
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câu 2
- This is main fyrst attempt at writing.
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- This is m~~ain~~y fyirst attempt at writing.
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- This is m~~ain~~y fyirst attempt at writing English.
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- I`m live in South Ural in a industrial city Chelyabinsk.
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- I`m live in South Ural in an industrial city, Chelyabinsk.
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- I`m live in ~~South Ural~~Chelyabinsk, which ins an industrial city ~~Chelyabinsk~~in South Ural.
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- I`m working the programmer.
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- I`m work~~ing the~~ as a programmer.
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