Pataisymai

Text from hienluong - English

  • A Free Day

    • I don't have to go to school or go to work today although it's not weekend. .
    • I have a lot of free time for doing what I like.
    • I woke up late at about 9am and I had breakfast at 9.30am.
    • After that I was listening to music while I was cleaning the house.
  • At 11am, I drank a cup of coffee and read a book named Ban Ki Moon.
    • It's a best seller book in Korean which wrote about the life of Ban Ki Moon who is the 8th Secretary General of the United States.
  • I think he is an intelligent and valorous Korean man.
    • He has ever challenged the world leaders about elimination of nuclear weapons from the globe.
    • Although he is a Korean, his origin is Vietnam.
    • Last year, he returned to Vietnam to visit his parentage and burn incense to ancestors.
    • I admired him about his effort, and I also felt so proud of him.
    • I really like a quote of him: " Study like a fool, dream like a genius".
    • This motivate me to know to dream more and study harder.
    • A free day without stressor which helps me relax and wide my knowledge.
    • It's a great day.

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