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About Alison's problem
- It is popularly believed that relationship with colleagues is very important thing.
- It is true because friendly conditions in office protect you from stresses and depressions.
- Did you hear story about Alison Fowler?
- She became a team leader by gaining a new position.
- But she encountered a resistance in her new team, along with lack of cooperation and loyalty.
- Some members of the team maintained their loyalty to their previous manager and resented the promotion of the new team leader.
- A few members drew up a list of complaints about Alison which they presented to her boss.
- Finally, she was unable to continue working for the organization due to the development of a psychiatric condition.
- I suppose that Alison should made friends with her colleagues.
- It is the best solution for this situation.
- If she made a friend with colleagues she could make very loyalty and friendly team.
- It is very good appointment for her reputation.
- Moreover, in this case she improves her communication skills.
- It is very important skill for manager.
- But this solution has some disadvantages.
- For example, her colleagues can pretend to be a friend and cheat in future.
- It can break her spirit.
- Also she should be stretched for her colleagues.
- It is not good because it can be understand that she is very weak leader.
- In conclusion, making friends with colleagues is very important thing for Alison.
- It has some disadvantages, but she gets a lot of benefits if she solves her problem.
- Good friends make Alison’s life more interesting and rich.
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