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    • About Alison's problem

    • It is popularly believed that relationship with colleagues is very important thing.
    • It is true because friendly conditions in office protect you from stresses and depressions.
    • Did you hear story about Alison Fowler?
  • She became a team leader by gaining a new position.
    • But she encountered a resistance in her new team, along with lack of cooperation and loyalty.
    • Some members of the team maintained their loyalty to their previous manager and resented the promotion of the new team leader.
  • A few members drew up a list of complaints about Alison which they presented to her boss.
  • Finally, she was unable to continue working for the organization due to the development of a psychiatric condition.
    • I suppose that Alison should made friends with her colleagues.
  • It is the best solution for this situation.
    • If she made a friend with colleagues she could make very loyalty and friendly team.
    • It is very good appointment for her reputation.
    • Moreover, in this case she improves her communication skills.
    • It is very important skill for manager.
  • But this solution has some disadvantages.
    • For example, her colleagues can pretend to be a friend and cheat in future.
    • It can break her spirit.
  • Also she should be stretched for her colleagues.
    • It is not good because it can be understand that she is very weak leader.
    • In conclusion, making friends with colleagues is very important thing for Alison.
  • It has some disadvantages, but she gets a lot of benefits if she solves her problem.
  • Good friends make Alison’s life more interesting and rich.

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