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- Help me please
Hello !
- I'm brazilian and stayed in Denmark I came in the beginning of january and I need learn English because I would like to stay two years here.

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PROSÍM, POMOŽTE OPRAVIT KAŽDOU VĚTU! - English

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- Help me please
  Vote now!
- ~~Help me please~~Please help me!
  robertgotin Komentáře 1
  
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- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Titul
Sentence 1
- Hello !
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I'm brazilian and stayed in Denmark I came in the beginning of january and I need learn English because I would like to stay two years here.
  Vote now!
- I'm bBrazilian and I am stayeding in Denmark. I came in the beginning of jJanuary and I need to learn English because I would like to stay two years here.
  JacobRavn Komentáře
  
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- I'm bBrazilian and ~~stayed~~live in Denmark. I came in the beginning of jJanuary and I need to learn English, because I would like to stay ~~two years here~~here for two more years.
  Tony2010 Komentáře
  
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- I'm am a brazilian ~~and~~. Now I am stayeding in Denmark . I came in the beginning of january ~~and~~here. I need to learn Eenglish because ~~I would like to stay~~i staying in Denmark for two years ~~here~~.
  robertgotin Komentáře 1
  
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- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 2