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- Help me please
Hello !
- I'm brazilian and stayed in Denmark I came in the beginning of january and I need learn English because I would like to stay two years here.

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- Help me please
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- ~~Help me please~~Please help me!
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- Hello !
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- I'm brazilian and stayed in Denmark I came in the beginning of january and I need learn English because I would like to stay two years here.
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- I'm bBrazilian and I am stayeding in Denmark. I came in the beginning of jJanuary and I need to learn English because I would like to stay two years here.
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- I'm bBrazilian and ~~stayed~~live in Denmark. I came in the beginning of jJanuary and I need to learn English, because I would like to stay ~~two years here~~here for two more years.
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- I'm am a brazilian ~~and~~. Now I am stayeding in Denmark . I came in the beginning of january ~~and~~here. I need to learn Eenglish because ~~I would like to stay~~i staying in Denmark for two years ~~here~~.
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