Korekty

Text from Dayuna - English

  • Reality shows

    • I have to admit that I spend little time in front of theTV.
    • Still, as everybody else I already saw a reality shows, and I am definetly not fond of.
    • Actually, I don't see the appeal of watching normal people at the tv whereas there are a lot around us in real life.
    • According to me, people enjoy reality shows because contestants give them the feeling to be superior : they mock at stupidity's contestants.
    • Regarding episodics tv shows, the ones where we follow a contestant only for one hour in his or her shooping day/ house/ kitchen, I think they're made to satisfay the telespectator's curiosity.
    • If these reasons are disappointfull, according to me the worst case is teenagers.
    • Indeed, teenagers are looking for theirself through these exaggerated personnalities, and I think reality shows make them dream of perfect love stories, perfect bodies, that they probably would not have beacause over there, everything is planned or fake.
    • Still, people think that reality shows will tell them a story, but more real than movies or books' stories, this is what is exaspering me.
    • Otherwise, a lot of reality shows defend values that I don't share : if a constestant wants to win, he has to do evrything he could to reach this goal, to the detriment of others.
    • Moreover, this kind of tv might be destructive for people who participate.
    • Indeed, between 1997 and 2012, eighteen old contestants commited a suicide.
    • We cant reproch them : they live for many months a fake reality, beeing watched all the time and the day after, they return to a normal life.
    • According to me, the fame is not worth there.
    • To conclud, I would say that even if reality shows are entertaining, they are definetly not great tv.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • According to me, people enjoy reality shows because contestants give them the feeling to be superior : they mock at stupidity's contestants.
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    • According to meIn my opinion, people enjoy reality shows because contestantsthey give them thea feeling to beof superior ity: they mock athe stupidity's of contestants.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Regarding episodics tv shows, the ones where we follow a contestant only for one hour in his or her shooping day/ house/ kitchen, I think they're made to satisfay the telespectator's curiosity.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Regarding episodics tv showTV show episodes, the ones where we only follow a contestant only for one hour in his or and see him/her do his/her shoopping day/ house/ kitchen/housework/cooking, I think they're made to satisfay the telespectator'sviewers' curiosity.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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  • Zdanie 7
    • Indeed, teenagers are looking for theirself through these exaggerated personnalities, and I think reality shows make them dream of perfect love stories, perfect bodies, that they probably would not have beacause over there, everything is planned or fake.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Indeed, teenagers are looking forseek a reflection of theirmself throughves in these exaggerated personnalities, and. I think reality shows make them dream of perfect love stories, and perfect bodies, that they could probably would not hanever achieve beacause over theren reality shows, everything is either planned or fake.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • Still, people think that reality shows will tell them a story, but more real than movies or books' stories, this is what is exaspering me.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Still, people think that reality shows will tell them a story, but a more realistic story than movies or books' stories, twhis is what isch exasperingates me.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Otherwise, a lot of reality shows defend values that I don't share : if a constestant wants to win, he has to do evrything he could to reach this goal, to the detriment of others.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • OtherwiseMoreover, a lot of reality shows defendpromote values that I don't share : if a constestant wants to win, he has to do everything he couldan to reach this goal, often to the detriment of others.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • We cant reproch them : they live for many months a fake reality, beeing watched all the time and the day after, they return to a normal life.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • We can't reproch them : they live a fake reality for many months a fake reality, beeing watched all the time, and the dayn continue to be watched even after, they return to a normal life.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12
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