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  • Slave ships

  • Last night, I read an article about the volvement of Britain in transatlanctic slave trade.
    • They talked about the kind they kept africans in their land and throught them in britain colonies and carribean for labour.
    • This black men crossed the atlantique and being landed at differents ports in Britain to be bought by rich persons.
    • Along this journeys, this enslaved men was chained and not barely fed.
    • When they were purchased, they were belonging of their owner, so their future generations.
    • This slaves, brought by million, created a commonly language in the britain colonies so a kind of black magic called the voodoo.
    • Colonies where we could find europeans because the labour they could find here, african slaves, carribeans and americans.
    • A large part of britain richess resulted of this trades.
  • Many people were rich, since the african who sold the african brothers, the owners of the ships who transported them until britain ports, the accountants of their ports, the slave mercants, the owners of the slaves and the settlers.
  • The principal activity were the sugar culture and its raffinery (sugar and rum).
    • Eventually, britain made a lot of money per this trade and free labour, and could built fine mansions, banks, new industries like cloth they would sell in african lands.
  • It's funny, isn't it ?
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    • They talked about the kind they kept africans in their land and throught them in britain colonies and carribean for labour.
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    • They talked about the kind they kept aAccording to the article they took Africans infrom their land and thbrought them in bto Britain's colonies and carthe Caribbean forwhere they laboured.
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    • This black men crossed the atlantique and being landed at differents ports in Britain to be bought by rich persons.
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    • Thisese black men crossed the aAtlantiquec and being landed at differents ports in Britain to be bought by rich personsople.
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    • When they were purchased, they were belonging of their owner, so their future generations.
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    • When they were purchased, they werebecame a belonging of their owner, soas did their future generationsoffspring.
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    • This slaves, brought by million, created a commonly language in the britain colonies so a kind of black magic called the voodoo.
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    • Thisese slaves, brought by million, created a commonly languagelanguage which became common in the bBritainish colonies soand a kind of black magic called the vVoodoo.
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    • Colonies where we could find europeans because the labour they could find here, african slaves, carribeans and americans.
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    • Colonies where we could find europeansIn these colonies Europeans could also be found because the labour they could find here, alabour there, in addition to African slaves, carCaribbeans and a people and Native Americans.
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    • Many people were rich, since the african who sold the african brothers, the owners of the ships who transported them until britain ports, the accountants of their ports, the slave mercants, the owners of the slaves and the settlers.
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    • Eventually, britain made a lot of money per this trade and free labour, and could built fine mansions, banks, new industries like cloth they would sell in african lands.
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    • Eventually, bBritain made a lot of money per thisfrom trade and free labour, and could built fine mansions, banks, new industries like cloth they would sell in aAfrican lands.
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