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    • regulation of the press ?

  • The British government has been trying for several years to regulate the press in his country.
    • The need to regulate street fleet appeared in 2006 when it was discovered that journalists had hacked the tabloids cell phones and bribed police all this in order to retrieve information for their articles.
  • It is for this reason that the government felt the need to regulate the British press, trying to limit the intrusion sometimes too much in people's lives by journalists but retaining the freedom of expression in newspapers.
  • The author believes that the government's plan includes anomalies.
  • In fact, this plan does not take good account of the emergence of online media and online media sometimes is not really journalism.
  • In addition, this plan therefore brings the idea of ​​state regulation of the press which is not always the best solution.
  • The author believes that the company has won more state regulation without this despite the abuse by tabloid journalists.

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    • The need to regulate street fleet appeared in 2006 when it was discovered that journalists had hacked the tabloids cell phones and bribed police all this in order to retrieve information for their articles.
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    • The need to regulate strthe Fleet flStreet, appeared in 2006 when it was discovered that journalists had hacked the tabloids cell phones and bribed police all this, in order to retrieve information for their articles.
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    • It is for this reason that the government felt the need to regulate the British press, trying to limit the intrusion sometimes too much in people's lives by journalists but retaining the freedom of expression in newspapers.
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    • In fact, this plan does not take good account of the emergence of online media and online media sometimes is not really journalism.
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    • In addition, this plan therefore brings the idea of ​​state regulation of the press which is not always the best solution.
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    • The author believes that the company has won more state regulation without this despite the abuse by tabloid journalists.
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