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  • My kitty

    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap, I love my cat, but today she dont want that I work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty.
    • I feel very relaxing when I do tickle my cat.
    • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
    • Today my cat started to venture at Xiomy's home, but meow when she saw the dog.
    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D

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    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap, I love my cat, but today she dont want that I work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty.
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    • I'm was doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap,. I love my cat, but today she donesn't want that I work, then,me to work. I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty with me, and started moving my hands over her fur to tickle her.
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    • I'm doin' my thing was chillin', when my kitten came to me, jumped up and sat on my lap,. I love my catkitten, but today she donesn't want that I work, tme to work. I brought her with me when, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kittyand then I used my hands to tickle her.
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    • I'm doin'g my thingjob, when my kitten caomes, jumped and sait on my lap, I love my cat, but today she donesn't want that I workme to work today, then, I went to my bed , brought her,im and hands ontook the cat for tickle to my kittyin my hands to tickle my cat.
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    • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
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    • I tookMy affection for the cats began when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, f. From that day onwards, I have been in love withe cats,: my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is also a cat from "chi's sweet home".
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and lat. Later, I'm going to take myeat dinner, and probably I started to longlong to be in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D
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