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  • Teaching science / writing task for CAE

  • Science has taken a very important place in our modern societies and touches a wide range of fields.
  • However, this subject seems to be unappealing to students for many reasons.
    • First of all, the way of teaching science is a little bit full and this subject has the reputation to be difficult to learn.
  • That's why schools and teachers should be very creative.
  • A good example of creativity in teaching science is the "city of science".
    • It's a place in Paris where people can discover different types of exhibitions such as the human body or how are made the weather reports etc. This place is very interactive and children can touch and play with different kind of exhibited materials.
    • The second reason is probably due to the fact that scientists are seen as asocial persons who prefer to live in their laboratory or in front or their computer rather than enjoying life.
    • This image is a caricature but could be one of the reasons why students aren't attracted by this kind of studies.
  • On the other hand, some scientific documentaries are very well made and show science in a very interesting and practical way.
    • In conclusion, our society needs new scientists but the only way to do so is to show through the media or through our educational and cultural system that science can be a fascinating subject that improves our everyday lives.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • It's a place in Paris where people can discover different types of exhibitions such as the human body or how are made the weather reports etc. This place is very interactive and children can touch and play with different kind of exhibited materials.
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    • It's a place in Paris where people can discover different types of exhibitions such as the human body or how are made the weather reports are made etc.. This place is very interactive and children can touch and play with different kinds of exhibited materials.
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    • The second reason is probably due to the fact that scientists are seen as asocial persons who prefer to live in their laboratory or in front or their computer rather than enjoying life.
      Stem nou!
    • The second reason is probably due to the fact that scientists are seen as asocial persons who prefer to live in their laboratory or in front orf their computer rather than enjoying life.
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    • In conclusion, our society needs new scientists but the only way to do so is to show through the media or through our educational and cultural system that science can be a fascinating subject that improves our everyday lives.
      Stem nou!
    • In conclusion, our society needs new scientists but the only way to do so is to show science through the media or through our educational and cultural system that science can be a fascinating subject that improves our everyday lives.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Opmerkings
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 10VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 10