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What about conversation?
- Hi everyone!!!
- I'm looking for some conversation to improve my English!!
- As a reward I can teach you some Italian :) Write me!!!

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- Hi everyone!!!
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- Hi everyone!!!
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- I'm looking for some conversation to improve my English!!
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- I' am looking ~~for some conversation to improve my English!!~~to improve my English with some conversation.
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- I'm looking for some ~~conversation to~~one to talk to so I can improve my English!!.
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- As a reward I can teach you some Italian :) Write me!!!
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- As a ~~reward~~n exchange I can teach you some Italian ~~:)¶~~.Write me!!!¶¶
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- As a reward I can teach you some Italian ~~:)¶Writ~~. Message me~~!!!~~.
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- ~~As a reward I can~~In exchange, I'm going to teach you some Italian :)¶~~Writ~~Message me!!!
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