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    • My choise

    • Sometimes It's difficult to choose what I am going to study at the college.
    • Maybe you think you are good for many things or you are good for nothing.
    • In my case it was different because when I was a child I always thought that I will be a great inventor, and I've never changed my mind since that time.
    • Many years later a family's friend gave me an electronic kit, and I was fascinated about it, I spent a lot of time with it, then I decided to study Electronic Engineering.
    • However I enjoyed so much to read psychology books and to learn about human behaviors, I read a lot of psychology books, I gave advices to my school peers So I was a little confused, should I study Electronic Engineering? or Should I study psychology?
    • I asked my mother and she said "what is your main goal in your life?
  • Have you changed your mind?
  • You must think which of these is your hobby or your real purpose on life".
    • So I realized that psychology was my hobby and my real purpose on life is to make an invention.
    • Now I am an electronic engineer, although I haven't made an invention yet, I try to learn something new every day and watch around me for getting some inspiration.
    • Despite of all I believe that some day I will make an invention to help many people in need.

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    • In my case it was different because when I was a child I always thought that I will be a great inventor, and I've never changed my mind since that time.
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    • In my case, it was different because when I was a child I always thought that I willould be a great inventor, and I've never changed my mind since that time.
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    • Many years later a family's friend gave me an electronic kit, and I was fascinated about it, I spent a lot of time with it, then I decided to study Electronic Engineering.
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    • Many years later a family's friend gave me an electronic kit, and I was fascinated aboutwith it, I spent a lot of time with it, then I decided to study Electronic Engineering.
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    • However I enjoyed so much to read psychology books and to learn about human behaviors, I read a lot of psychology books, I gave advices to my school peers So I was a little confused, should I study Electronic Engineering? or Should I study psychology?
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    • However I enjoyed so much to reading psychology books and tomuch as well as learning about human behaviors, I read a lot of psychology books, I gave advices to my school peers S, so I was a little confused, should I study Electronic Engineering? or Should I study psychology?
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    • Now I am an electronic engineer, although I haven't made an invention yet, I try to learn something new every day and watch around me for getting some inspiration.
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    • Now I am an electronic engineer, although I haven't made an invention yetinvented anything so far, I try to learn something new every day and watch around me for getting yself to get (some) inspiration.
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