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  • Why Do I love the blue color?

    • It all started when I was a child, I used to see the sky, and what I saw was a lot of beautiful birds, they sang beautifully, and they looked very happy.
    • I thought that they symbolized the freedom and that you could achieve anything you want.
    • Some years later my father said would you like to go to the beach?
    • We said yes, I have never seen the sea.
    • Then we went to San Andres Islands In Colombia, this sea is very awesome, it has many different colors, that's why it's known as the sea of seven colors, I enjoyed so much the sea.
    • 4 years later I was in my bedroom when a beautiful Australian bird comes to my house, It was blue, and It was the most wonderful bird that I've ever known, I loved It so much, He lived in my house for approximately 4 years, we bought a female Australian bird and they gave birth a lot of beautiful birds of different colors.
    • However He the Firts was the favorite, he was a special bird, It sounds crazy but he looked as a little person, he was very smart.
    • One day we found him dead on my yard and the other birds was around him trying to lift him, It was so sad, but i remember him, when a saw a bird or when I look to the sky, or when I see something blue.

HELP ELKE ZIN TE CORRIGEREN, AUB! - English

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    • It all started when I was a child, I used to see the sky, and what I saw was a lot of beautiful birds, they sang beautifully, and they looked very happy.
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    • It all started when I was a child, I used to seelook up to the sky, and what I saw was a lot of beautiful birds, they sang beautifully, and they looked very happy.
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    • Then we went to San Andres Islands In Colombia, this sea is very awesome, it has many different colors, that's why it's known as the sea of seven colors, I enjoyed so much the sea.
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    • Then we went to San Andres Islands Iin Colombia,; thise sea is verythere is so awesome, it has many different colors, that's why it's known as the sea of seven colors,. I enjoyed it so much the sea.
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    • 4 years later I was in my bedroom when a beautiful Australian bird comes to my house, It was blue, and It was the most wonderful bird that I've ever known, I loved It so much, He lived in my house for approximately 4 years, we bought a female Australian bird and they gave birth a lot of beautiful birds of different colors.
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    • 4Four years later, I was in my bedroom when a beautiful Australian male bird coames to my house,. It was blue, and Iit was the most wonderful bird that I've ever known,seen; I loved It so much,. He lived in my house for approximately 4 years, we bought. We soon decided to buy a female Australian bird and; they mate and gave birth to a lot of beautiful birds of different colors.
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    • One day we found him dead on my yard and the other birds was around him trying to lift him, It was so sad, but i remember him, when a saw a bird or when I look to the sky, or when I see something blue.
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    • One day we found him dead oin my yard and the other birds was around him trying to lift him, Iit was so sad, but i remember. I always get reminded of him, when a sawever I see a bird or when I look to the sky, or when I see something blue.
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