Korreksies

Text from yananim - English

  • compare and contast pictures

    • I`d like to compare and contast two pictures.I think that theme which relates these photo is way of sport.In the first picture you can see a footboll team, who are plaing on the football field .The plaers seem to be happy.It is a summertime and plaers are wearing in spetial form.
    • In the second picture you can see one young girl. she is wearing warn clothes ,goggles and mittens.In the backgraund you can see a beautiful side with a mountins and forest.
    • These pictures have a lot in commen .Both pictures about sport.They shows young people , who is doing sport in spesiol outfit.
    • This people are practically of the same age.
    • The most obvious difference brtween these pictures is kind of sports which is football and skiing.
    • Moreover, in the first picture many people and in the second picture only one girl.
    • Finale in 1 photo are wearing summer form ,while the girl in 2 photo s wearing warm.
    • Frankly spiaking,these kinds of sport is not my cup of tea.I would never take up to this kind of sport.Becouse I prefer to do something indoors.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • I`d like to compare and contast two pictures.I think that theme which relates these photo is way of sport.In the first picture you can see a footboll team, who are plaing on the football field .The plaers seem to be happy.It is a summertime and plaers are wearing in spetial form.
      Stem nou!
    • I`d like to compare and contrast two pictures. I think that the theme which relates these photos is way of sport.s. In the first picture, you can see a footboall team, who are playing on thea football field .The players seem to be happy. It is a summertime and the players are all wearing in spetcial uniform.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • In the second picture you can see one young girl. she is wearing warn clothes ,goggles and mittens.In the backgraund you can see a beautiful side with a mountins and forest.
      Stem nou!
    • In the second picture, you can see one young girl. sShe is wearing warnm clothes , goggles, and mittens. In the backgraound, you can see a beautiful expanse of the countryside with a mountains and a forest.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2
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  • Sentence 8
    • Frankly spiaking,these kinds of sport is not my cup of tea.I would never take up to this kind of sport.Becouse I prefer to do something indoors.
      Stem nou!
    • Frankly spieaking, these kinds of sport iss are not my cup of tea. I would never take up to this kind ofeither of these sport.Bs, becoause I prefer to do something indoors.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8