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    • January 13th.

    • Today is Wednesday, This day three month ago, a rainy day, I wearing a jacket that my brother give to me.
    • This day my brother wore a hooded jacket that I gave for his birthday.
    • This day I said to my brother: "bonis, I need go at the university early", he said not, I said again: "you are to go at the university with my now" After we took a public bike, while we went to the university my brother fell and broke the arm.
    • Until now, he can rotate the arm.
    • since that day I promised to myself, I'll go to transact the drive pass, when I can use the car I'll use it.

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    • Today is Wednesday, This day three month ago, a rainy day, I wearing a jacket that my brother give to me.
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    • Today is Wednesday, ¶This day three month ago, a rainy day, I....¶On a wednesday like this , a rainy wednesday a long time ago. I was wearing a jJacket that my brother giave to me.
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    • Today is Wednesday, ¶This. That day three months ago, was a rainy day,. I'm wearing a jacket that my brother giave to me.
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    • This day I said to my brother: "bonis, I need go at the university early", he said not, I said again: "you are to go at the university with my now" After we took a public bike, while we went to the university my brother fell and broke the arm.
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    • Thisat day Ii said to my brother: "bonis, I need go at that i needed to get earlier than usual to the university early", hHe said not, I said again: "you are to go at the university with my now"¶After we took a public bike, while we went to the university my brother fell refused to take me to at starters and then he actually agreed to take me. We took a state bike and sadly he fell from the bike and broke thehis arm.
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    • This day I said to my brother: "bBonis, I need go ato the university, early", he said "not,." I said again:, "yYou are to go atgoing to the university with mye, now"¶After." When we took a public bike, while we wentrental bike to the university my brother fell off the bike and broke thehis arm.
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    • since that day I promised to myself, I'll go to transact the drive pass, when I can use the car I'll use it.
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    • and since that very day , I promised to myself, I'll go to transact the drive pass, when I can use the car I'll that i will take out the drivers licence , to get a car in time and use it.
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