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Văn bản từ Sabribri - English

  • Motivation letter to do voluntary work

    • Each particle of this planet call me.
    • I wish I could discover all ways of life of differents locale people.
    • A trip in himself is an improvement source, so when moreover it's share with people from every where in the earth, animated by the same thirst of discovery, I think it can represent for me an experience outstanding .

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    • A trip in himself is an improvement source, so when moreover it's share with people from every where in the earth, animated by the same thirst of discovery, I think it can represent for me an experience outstanding .
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