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  • The Line Graph

  • The line graph illustrates the population of four different type of turtles (Leatherback, Green Turtles, All Species and Olive Ridley Turtles) in India between 1980 and 2012.
  • Units are measured indicatively.
    • Overall the population of the Olive Ridley Turtles always increased over the period given and it reached the peak value (140) during the 1998.
  • Furthermore, after that year the population number remained steady around the peak, with little drops in 2004 and 2008.
    • About Leatherback Turtles, as all type of turtles, started with a value of 100, but after that year in 1990 it began a dramatically drop, arriving to reach the least value (50).
    • On the other hand, All Species of Turtles and the Green Turtles held the same value (100) for all this time; with just little drops and rises during the last years.
    • Although, All species grew slow but steady, reaching a bigger value (110) than the amount of Green Turtles.

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    • The line graph illustrates the population of four different type of turtles (Leatherback, Green Turtles, All Species and Olive Ridley Turtles) in India between 1980 and 2012.
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    • Overall the population of the Olive Ridley Turtles always increased over the period given and it reached the peak value (140) during the 1998.
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    • Overall the population of the Olive Ridley Turtles always increased over the period givenduring the given period and it reached the peak value (140) during the 1998.
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    • Furthermore, after that year the population number remained steady around the peak, with little drops in 2004 and 2008.
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    • About Leatherback Turtles, as all type of turtles, started with a value of 100, but after that year in 1990 it began a dramatically drop, arriving to reach the least value (50).
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    • About Leatherback Turtles, as allwith all other type of turtles, it started with a value of 100, b. But after thate year in 1990 it beganfell to a dramatically drop, arriving to reach the least value (50).
    • About Leatherback Turtles, as all type of turtles, started with a value of 100, but after that year in 1990 it began a dramatically drop, arrivfalling to reach the least value (50).
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    • On the other hand, All Species of Turtles and the Green Turtles held the same value (100) for all this time; with just little drops and rises during the last years.
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    • On the other hand, Aall Sspecies of Turtles and the Green Turtles held the same value (100) for allthroughout this time; with just little drops and rises during the last years.
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