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  • Hello would you correct me please :))

    • Synthesis Migrant.
    • I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges To begin with, I'd like to give a definition, this notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies.
    • Our study begin on 15th March 2011.
    • This date is when Syria entered the war.
    • Killed nearly 300 000 people, it's an international war.
    • From this internationality ensue the purpose of our study, which is the migration.
  • In fact the majority of war victims want to flee their country.
    • That is how we are entiled to ask : what are the consequences and the reactions of politicians ans population about this migration ?
    • In the first place we will evoke the reasons and conditions of migrnats' departures ; then we will talk about the welcome of the population and finally the reaction of the countries.
    • 1) Reasons and conditions of migrants' departures.
  • a) They flee war-torn country.
    • -war hits directly syrian population (300 000 dead people).
    • -violence within Syria (execution ; blitz).
  • b) A dangerous journey.
    • -be ready for anything to flee.
    • -risk their lives.
    • -semptember = accident a migrants' boat which made 13 dead.
  • c) A shocking picture which raises public awarness.
    • -after the appearence of picture - lot of people want to support migrants.
    • -14 september = demonstration in london - scream «open the border».
  • 2) The welcome of the population.
    • a) Acceptaion.
    • -outpouring of generosity and solidarity. b) Rejection.
    • -(video) → kick fleeing refugees.
  • c) Pros and cons of welcoming migrants.
    • -Pros : solution of demographic crisis - created cultural exchanges.
    • -Cons : racial tension - dilute a contry's cultural identity.
    • 3) The reactons of the contries.
  • a) The contries which are involved and some figures about the influx of migrants. -be overfull.
  • -Germany, Hungary, Greece, France.
  • b)Politicians' decisions.
    • -face with this situation, emergency decision.
    • -closed borders.
    • -put up fonces.
    • c)These measures are in opposition with the EU's schengen agreement and the international treaty on refugees.
    • -treaty to abolish border controls within Europe.
    • -They should find other solution.
    • This study motivates us to ask ourselves about the migrant's future and about several decision I think that this situation is tragic and we should react.
    • I don't know the solutions for a long period but I know that nobody can be indefferent and solidarity should be required.

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