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- Synthesis Migrant.
- I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges To begin with, I'd like to give a definition, this notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies.
- Our study begin on 15th March 2011.
- This date is when Syria entered the war.
- Killed nearly 300 000 people, it's an international war.
- From this internationality ensue the purpose of our study, which is the migration.
- In fact the majority of war victims want to flee their country.
- That is how we are entiled to ask : what are the consequences and the reactions of politicians ans population about this migration ?
- In the first place we will evoke the reasons and conditions of migrnats' departures ; then we will talk about the welcome of the population and finally the reaction of the countries.
- 1) Reasons and conditions of migrants' departures.
- a) They flee war-torn country.
- -war hits directly syrian population (300 000 dead people).
- -violence within Syria (execution ; blitz).
- b) A dangerous journey.
- -be ready for anything to flee.
- -risk their lives.
- -semptember = accident a migrants' boat which made 13 dead.
- c) A shocking picture which raises public awarness.
- -after the appearence of picture - lot of people want to support migrants.
- -14 september = demonstration in london - scream «open the border».
- 2) The welcome of the population.
- a) Acceptaion.
- -outpouring of generosity and solidarity. b) Rejection.
- -(video) → kick fleeing refugees.
- c) Pros and cons of welcoming migrants.
- -Pros : solution of demographic crisis - created cultural exchanges.
- -Cons : racial tension - dilute a contry's cultural identity.
- 3) The reactons of the contries.
- a) The contries which are involved and some figures about the influx of migrants. -be overfull.
- -Germany, Hungary, Greece, France.
- b)Politicians' decisions.
- -face with this situation, emergency decision.
- -closed borders.
- -put up fonces.
- c)These measures are in opposition with the EU's schengen agreement and the international treaty on refugees.
- -treaty to abolish border controls within Europe.
- -They should find other solution.
- This study motivates us to ask ourselves about the migrant's future and about several decision I think that this situation is tragic and we should react.
- I don't know the solutions for a long period but I know that nobody can be indefferent and solidarity should be required.
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