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    • The one million dollars idea

    • How many times have we read a post of a one million dollar idea that will change the word, hear a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk ourselves not without suspicion about or super secret idea that will make us rich?.
    • Of course this not in rare occasions is followed by an 'only if I have...' the time? the people? already a million?.
    • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a delusion, could be a good one but a it's delusion either way.
    • A profounder thinking will take us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could end in a product or services that is valued in a seven figures number?

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  • câu 1
    • How many times have we read a post of a one million dollar idea that will change the word, hear a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk ourselves not without suspicion about or super secret idea that will make us rich?.
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    • How many times have we read a post ofabout a one million dollar idea that will change the world, hear a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk to ourselves not without suspicion about our super secret idea that will make us rich?.
    • How many times have we read a post of about a one million dollar idea that will change the world, heard a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk among ourselves not without suspicion about orecting a super secret idea that will make us rich?.
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  • câu 2
    • Of course this not in rare occasions is followed by an 'only if I have...' the time? the people? already a million?.
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    • Of course this not in rare occasions ialmost always followed by an 'only if I have...' the time? the people? already a million?.
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    • Of course this not in rare occasions is followed by an 'only if I have...' - the time? the people? already a million?.. in most occasions.
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  • câu 3
    • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a delusion, could be a good one but a it's delusion either way.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a delusion,. It could be a good oneidea but a it's delusion either way.
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    • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a den illusion,.It could be a good one but a it's dean illusion either way.
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  • câu 4
    • A profounder thinking will take us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could end in a product or services that is valued in a seven figures number?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A more profounder thinking will takebring us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could end in a product or services that is valued in a seven figures number?
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    • A profounder thinking will take us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could endresult into a product or services that is valued into a seven figures number?
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