Correcties

Phones

• The issue at hand is smart phones are important tools or not for children.

• This issue is very actual and important nowdays, because a lot of children have phones, it is very hard to find a child without a phone.

• I belive that smart phones are important tools to keep in touch, and it is the better opinion, because I think that children must keep connection with their parents.

• Smart phones as a nessecary part of children's life is preferable because they can always say where they are.

• Once, when I was fifteen years old, I was late at my friend's, I called my mother in order to say that I was with my friend, and that she had not to worry about me.

• Additionally, smart phones must have every child is a better opinion than the idea that it is not nessecary.

• It is very useful there is Internet access, thus parents can control their children, and they can know what a child is interested in.

• Once, when I was a pupil, our class prepared the play for Christmas at school.

• At that evening I was late in my teacher's home, because I made decorations, it was already dark outside, and also it was getting rain, so I din't take an umbrella with me.

• I sent the parents my coordinate, and they could easily to get there and took me home.

• Ultimatelly, I feel that my choice is the correct one.