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  • Christmas Day

  • On Christmas Day I went with my brother and my mother to my aunt's house in Naples.
    • My cousin brought us there with his beautiful big new grey car.
    • We arrived in the morning and we stayed there all day.
    • When we arrived, my aunt welcomed us very warmly because I hadn't saw her for many years.
    • I was also very happy to see the others because I missed them so much : there were my two cousins with their girlfriends and the little daughter of one of them.
    • She's a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl, I was looking forward to seeing her and I loved spending time with her playing and carrying her.
    • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keep her for too long, so I also helped her to walk, keeping her hands very carefully/attentively .
    • She's a very lively and sunny little girl, and although she didn't know me, she didn't have any problem to stay with me without her mother.
    • We ate all together a very delicious seafood pasta and after we talked all together.
    • There also were the two cats which were the cats of my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it we very surprising seeing how they had become old.
    • The white cat, had a bad illness and vets had to operate it and to remove its ears.
  • It also looked very sad because it, like all of us, missed my cousin.
    • In fact, while my two cousins who were there at Christmas live alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flavia.
    • She was a very solar beautiful young girl, and she unfortunately died last year in November, because of a tumor.
  • She was only 23 years old and she didn't deserve that..
    • I love her so much and I always talked with her, she was the only cousin to who I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, so she was the youngest of my cousins.
    • So although it was Christmas, we couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , but anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I know how difficult can be, especially during holiday days.
    • I hope I can come back soon to her house, so that I can keep her company, because I know how sad and empty can be that house when she's alone only with my uncle.

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    • I was also very happy to see the others because I missed them so much : there were my two cousins with their girlfriends and the little daughter of one of them.
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    • I was also very happy to see the others because I missed them so much : there were m. My two cousins came with theier girlfriends and the little daughter of one of themone year old daughter.
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    • I was also very happy to see the othersm because I missed them so much : t. There were my two cousins with their girlfriends and the little daughter of one of them.
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    • She's a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl, I was looking forward to seeing her and I loved spending time with her playing and carrying her.
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    • She's a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl,. I was looking forward to seeing her and. I loved spending time with her, playing and carrying her.
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    • She' was a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl,. I was looking forward to smeeingt her and I loved spending time with her playing and carrying her.
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    • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keep her for too long, so I also helped her to walk, keeping her hands very carefully/attentively .
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    • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keep her for too long, so I also helped her to walk, keepholding her hands very carefully/attentively .
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    • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keepcarry her for too long, s. So I also helped her to walk, keep also , holding her hands very carefully/attentively .
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    • She's a very lively and sunny little girl, and although she didn't know me, she didn't have any problem to stay with me without her mother.
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    • She's a very lively and a sunny little girl, and a. Although she didn't know me, she didn't have any problem to stay with me without her mother.
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    • She's a very lively and sunnybright little girl, and although she didn't knoew me, she didn'tnever haved any problem to stay with me without her mother.
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    • There also were the two cats which were the cats of my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it we very surprising seeing how they had become old.
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    • There also werewere also the two cats which were the cats of, from my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it weas very surprising seeing how they had become old.
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    • There also were the two cats which were thewere also two cats of my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it weas very surprising to seeing how big they had become old.
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    • In fact, while my two cousins who were there at Christmas live alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flavia.
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    • In fact, while my two cousins who were there at Christmas liveare living alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flaviamy cousin Flavia was still living in my aunt's house.
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    • In fact, while my two cousins who were present there at Christmas lived alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flaviamy cousin Flavia still lived alone with my aunt.
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    • I love her so much and I always talked with her, she was the only cousin to who I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, so she was the youngest of my cousins.
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    • I love her so much and I always talked with her, she was the only cousin to whom I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, so she was the youngest of my cousinsshe was the youngest of my cousins - we only had 6 years of difference.
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    • I loved her so much and I always talked with her, s. She was the only cousin towith whom I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, between us, and also she was the youngest ofamong my cousins.
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    • So although it was Christmas, we couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , but anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I know how difficult can be, especially during holiday days.
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    • So although it was Christmas, wWe couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , but anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I know how difficult can be, especially during holiday daysChristmas the way we wanted to. I tried to distract my aunt, as the holidays can be particularly difficult for her.
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    • So although it was Christmas, we couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , b. But anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I knoew how difficult it can be, especially during holiday days.
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    • I hope I can come back soon to her house, so that I can keep her company, because I know how sad and empty can be that house when she's alone only with my uncle.
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    • I hope that I can come back soon to her house, so that I can keep her company,on because I know how sad and empty can be that house can be. Especially, when she's alone only with my uncle.
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    • I hope I can cometo return back soon to her house, so that I can keepgive her company, b. Because I know how sad and empty can be that house ca be when she's alone only with my uncle.
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