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Text from Trilobit - English

  • About failures

    • When people ask about my failures, I always mention the old maxim that nobody is perfect, but there is no any excuse for us, if do not try to learn from our failures and avoid them in the future.
  • That is all about me.
    • I always take the responsibility for my shortcomings.
  • Let me provide you with an example.
    • When I just had started to work as a tour guide in the Museum, it was a bit stressful for me to hand a group of 40 more people.
    • The first excursion was a die-hard mission at all.
    • And the text was too boring to engage foreign customers.
  • So, what did I do?
    • I worked on my organizational skills, I trained how to engage more people in listening, how to attract their attention.
    • I changed the text a lot, included some additional material that foreign customers were interested in more, and contracted other places in the text in order to meet the set time.
    • And it was also difficult to speak with such a big number of people at the same time.
  • So, I trained my voice and finally succeeded as it was getting stronger and stronger everytime.

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