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- my bedroom
- It my life but is vrey extraordiray.
Yesterday in come back to the school I see in bed one spider a should : "mam's' , mam's' ' ( mam's'=mom ). And my.
- Brother dead a spider and my happy.
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- my bedroom
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- ~~my bedroom~~it's my life and it's very extraordinary.¶Yesterday I came back from school and I saw a spider on my bed, I shouted : ' mom mom mom '. Then my brother killed the spider and I was happy.
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- It my life but is vrey extraordiray.
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- It is my life, but i~~s vrey~~t is extraordinaray.
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- Yesterday in come back to the school I see in bed one spider a should : "mam's' , mam's' ' ( mam's'=mom ). And my.
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- Brother dead a spider and my happy.
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- Brother ~~dea~~killed a spider and myade me happy.
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- :) good day and may the odds is in. Your favour. Hunger games
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- :) Have good day and may the odds isbe in. Your favour. Hunger games
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